Oh! Threepio was such a funny twist I didn't see coming. You wrote him perfectly. I knew it wasn't going to go right with the hand holding from the moment it was mentioned as they exited the closet - but that was a funny surprise to cause more frustrating delay grief and misunderstanding. You did great. Truly frustrated at the same time but nicely done with the chapter. The conversations between Rey & Poe and Rey & Finn felt very real and honest.
Thank you! I had to get Threepio in there. It's a tradition now for him to get in the way of romance and I felt compelled to continue it. Also I just really like making Poe suffer because I'm terrible.
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