This was just beautiful. My heart ached for Lucy and the person she used to be, she has all the experience and want of a woman, but it lives inside the body of a child. I particularly loved the scenes with her and Edmund, of all of them he grew the most.
In regards to the writing, your words flow beautifully, a strong almost stream of consciousness that reminds me of some of my favourite stories from old. Gorgeously written
Thank you so much, I'm incredibly flattered you enjoyed it so much! There's so much about their experiences that must genuinely *ache*, when you actually think about it, and that's what I wanted to convey here with Lucy.
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