This is a bit confusing, do you have a plan for a prequel or anything, that clarifies things a bit more? Even just a summary, like one shots on each couple, of the siblings growing up, etc.
The story with Harry and Hermione seemed rather forced and rushed, not well explained.
It's definitely a good story, but it has a few issues (as most stories do)
Thank you for the idea and I'm sorry if it was confusing to you I don't have any plans for a prequel at the given moment as I have another idea I wanted to write but it's an idea I might work on, thank you for the recommendation As for the couples, I realized that after I finished the story😅 I didn't want to focus on the romance and rushed it as a result I'll make sure to put that in mind for any stories I write next. Thank you for reading my book.
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