Comment on Parameters NULL: Our Fractured State

  1. That is the most brilliant use of (apparent) 2nd person I’ve ever seen. Brava.

    Combat SecUnit is so horribly, juicily broken that I almost feel guilty enjoying this fic. But I’m two chapters in and it’s a raw sort of delightful.

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      <3 ngl I had so much fun with the play on 2nd person POV for this fic

      And yeah CSU’s POV is. Sure something. That’s okay, I’m allowed to create fiction where shit is just flagrantly feral and have fun with it uwu

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