Comment on Racing Downhill

  1. kitty_bunns on Chapter 1 Sat 11 Jun 2022 04:56AM UTC

    god i love the first chapter already, and it's so full of cool plot details just from the first chapter!!!! it really opens the door to figuring out how empty tommy’s home is, to purpled and punz vaguely underlying care for tommy, as well as tommy slight bitterness to being able to lie so well about his relationships with bbh [mann i hope he gets happier!!!!!!!]
    also ranboo appearance wahooo!!!!!!!! oh boy he is Tall ! and i love how sam's shop and characters are also connected to the races, thats pretty neat!
    also lolll??? punz does live up to his racer name its so funny that hes done it enough to be known as That person to be switching for the money lmao
    [eyes] ohh im looking with the names of ender and nuke ohohoo i wonder how well they are able to play on the race track mmm
    “. God, why was it so hard to talk to adults sometimes?” honestly felt???? sometimes talking to other students even in the same age group that don’t know what references you are talking about is so painful and embarrassing and ough
    god tubbo the absolute chihuahua HAHA he's feisty !!!!
    oh these characters are so delightful chaotic especially with tommys casual murder attempt on the race track lmaoo purpled and tommy are learning and teaching each other
    also the price money wowww DANG the cash money!!!!!!!! it's no wonder why they are racing for the money hahah [i wonder where they get the money from hmm]
    god i could point out all the delightful small details in this whole chapter i just love it soo much!??? tommy purpled chaotic energy they are soo mean to each other with all their banter and threats but god at the end of the day they care about each other as friends enough to blow each other’s phone up with notifications<3 its great and silly and i love the energy with my whole heart, and this chapter was an absolute joy to read through so far ^_^

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    1. LeoZOfficial on Chapter 1 Sun 12 Jun 2022 06:46PM UTC

      Oh my stars, thank you so much! I’m sure I can speak for both of us and say that this comment means so much to us! It’s rare for a small fic like this to get one comments like yours, I’m so grateful. We’re so glad you enjoy this fic! I love how you analyzed it. More chaotic and heart breaking angst is on its way! [The prize money……? We… we don’t… we don’t talk about that…. Yk….]

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