A sad chapter but a good one - I got emotional over Kurt’s grief, it was so well-portrayed! Also lol at Blaine unknowingly being jealous of himself because Kurt wants to talk to him
I'm really glad to hear that the grief is well-portrayed. You have seen my (gestures around) difficulties with this fic, and the part I was most unhappy with was this, because by making the fic a full Blaine POV, I sometimes was afraid that I didn't put enough care in this delicate topic. I tried to show how much it affects Kurt despite the limitations (of Blaine POV and that POV only knowing Kurt through Discord), but as a result I didn't want to feel like it was too shoe-horned in. Now I know grief can overwhelm you. I have the same thing with the people I've lost, but yeah I suppose I was a bit afraid that aforementioned limitations made it look like "oh btw Burt's dead!!!"
It definitely didn’t feel shoehorned, and I think you did a great job of showing how Blaine experienced it from a distance. And showing how Kurt is still struggling and healing!
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