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1. givemeagooddream on Chapter 1 Tue 19 Jul 2022 06:06AM UTC

   

   AHHH!!!! THIS IS SO COOL SO FAR! I LOVE IT!
   the way u set ur scenes up is really immersive? is that the word i want to use? idk but i really fell into the story! u did a great job with ur opening chapter! really established dannys feeling and hopes right there.
   though jazz didn't do much this chap i really liked the vibe u gave her! the tone u set for her and dannys relationship was nice
   oh danny and his longing for his brother always sends me,,
   i can't wait to see how sam and the rest of them get in there
   thank u for the chapter! keep up the good work!

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2. 1. TourettesDog on Chapter 1 Wed 20 Jul 2022 02:25AM UTC

      

      AHHHH thank you so much for the kind comment!!! I'm really happy that you enjoy my scene setups <3 ; u ;

      I love Jazz, so I hope my writing of her doesn't disappoint! <3

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