Hope your doing better, and if you’re not I hope you get better soon! So far you have my favorite characterization for these characters despite writing them for the first time. From the worry and emotional distress to the description of once kinder moments! My favorite part was your description of the sickening laughter and tears luffy had from makino’s pov (he just can’t stop laughing… if you know what I mean) and I love the introduction of Deuce on sixis with Ace who had talked a lot about luffy…there’s just a lot I enjoyed, sorry if this is a little repetitive. Thank you for the chapter! 😖❤️
Oh this is the sweetest comment I’ve ever gotten! It really means a lot to me that you enjoyed the characterization so much! I was nervous I wasn’t doing them justice! So happy you liked it!! Next chapter won’t take nearly as long as this one did, I hope you continue to read! :D
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