Comment on kit's out of the bag

  1. I really liked this chapter!

    I like how we got a perspective switch halfway through to see Max’s perspective on the whole ordeal, I think it’s really nice to be able to see what both of them are thinking. I really hope Max gets his act together sooner than later because right now Kit is totally right in how she describes him. He’s like a little boy pulling on girl’s pigtails at the playground because he doesn’t know how to tell them he like them.

    I really like seeing Kit making friends with the rest of the drivers. Kit and Daniel’s combined Australianess is always really entertaining to watch.

    Can’t wait to see what happens next!

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    1. glad you liked it! im aussie too if you couldnt tell lmao 😬

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