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  1. Dokkaebi_Reader on Chapter 3 Sat 30 Jul 2022 01:47PM UTC

    This is what I want from the sparrow, working together vs Umbrella Academy which is dysfunctional.

    The s3 ep1 was unfair to fight considering the Umbrellas fought with a whole army. Oh well, at least I have this fight.

    Poor Five though was so tired that his instinct and alertness didn't wake him up or fully woke him up. He needs vacation and retirement.

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    1. JBD302020 on Chapter 3 Sat 30 Jul 2022 03:07PM UTC

      Yay! Glad you liked the fight! I actually already re-wrote it correcting Jayme's power, but I really like this version and I'm thinking maybe I can get away with leaving her power as is because I wrote it before S3 lol. We'll see if I switch it out with the other version I wrote. :)

      Thank you again! You are so awesome to leave a comment every chapter! I appreciate it so much!!!! ^_^

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