I love this story so much! I just read through all of it today. Your style is so lovely! I felt a lump in my throat through all the sad bits. All the different character relationships are so brilliant. I especially love Luna and Harry's sibling dynamic <3. I haven't read many stories where they have that kind of relationship and I love it so much. I also am so drawn to the scenes with Tom and Harry. There's so much lovely tension in every sentence. I love the way Harry's magic works and his interest in runes. I always wished Harry had taken either Arithmancy or Runes in the actual books because it opens up so many wonderful aspects of how magic can work. I love the way you portray magic in this story especially. I can't wait to see Harry's relationships expand. I'm not sure you plan on Harry ever getting rid of his obscurus, but I read on the wiki that Dumbledore said the only way to do it is through feeling a great sense of belonging. I'm excited to see if Harry can achieve that. I can't wait for Snape to discover he's an Obscurial and become a full-blown mentor. This is an incredible piece with such great bones to make a masterpiece, and I'm very excited to see how you go from here.
I love this work so much. Thank you for writing it! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter whenever it's ready for us <3
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LovelyLotus on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Aug 2022 08:13PM UTC
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