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  1. Shakarn_Agent on Chapter 6 Sat 27 Aug 2022 04:18PM UTC

    Damn, this is probably the best/funniest Panacea that I've read in a while (or, in all honesty, ever). She's just so done with everything, and the idea of MM adopting her makes me unnaturally happy. Taylor might actually get a friend!

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    1. SomeoneYouWontRemember on Chapter 6 Mon 29 Aug 2022 03:02AM UTC

      Yep, tho ppl really like pillbug ship so I'm considering that as well. Mostly leaning towards Amy being mushy and happy to have a normal sister of sorts tho

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      1. Shakarn_Agent on Chapter 6 Mon 29 Aug 2022 03:31AM UTC

        Hmm... either could work; with your writing style, I'd say that you should at least start them off as friends/siblings unless/until they naturally start developing feelings towards one another. My advice might seem a bit obvious, but I've noticed that "slow burn with an obvious attraction" is a reoccurring theme in romantic fanfictions (even outside of Worm). Seeing as how you write your characters based on their personal decisions rather than an overarching plot (at least, I think you do), taking it slow would probably be the best bet. As I said earlier, however, I think you could write either of the outcomes incredibly well.

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      2. amaya (Guest) on Chapter 6 Mon 05 Sep 2022 01:33PM UTC

        Kind of off to have her move from worrying about obsessing over her sister to starting a relationship with a new sister.

        Unless the plan is some tragedy setup where she goes for it and that crack eventually leads to loosening her rules to try to fix Taylor and oopsing things it’s probably better nerratively not to have a relationship.

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