This is really good so far!! I especially like Mama Leo so I’m excited to see where this goes!
One thing I was wondering, are those run on sentences on purpose? It’s alright if its your writing style, I was just wondering because it makes your writing a bit chunky. On that note, are you looking for any beta readers? Bc I’m happy to beta read for you if you’d let me because this is genuinely a cool idea and I want to see where this goes!
So for the running-on sentences this is an older write that I had in mind, but just never gotten around to posting, so no, the running-on sentences are not on purpose and are nothing more than me trying to figure out how to write a book.
For the beta readers, I haven't really thought about having anyone beta read, but if you are up to it then I'm sure I can figure out how it works for you.
I'm still new to this whole thing, so bear with me on this. But I'm glad you enjoy the story.
Hey, I'm so sorry, but I've just realized I don't have a method of communicating that I am comfortable giving out right now. I'm going to try and see if I can make one, but I'm sorry because I'm not too comfortable with giving out ways to communicate with me to others just get.
I'm sorry to disappoint, I thought bata reading was something you can do on Ao3.
But I'm thankful that you like the series, and all of the advice that you have is also appreciated.
Again, I'm sorry but thank you for your support, and if I do find a way to communicate with others that I'm comfortable with, I'll be sure to let it be known.
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