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  1. opalescent_potato on Chapter 8 Tue 17 Jan 2023 10:45PM UTC

    this is just SUCH a fun au concept, and you're executing it SO well

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    1. beeayy on Chapter 8 Wed 18 Jan 2023 07:43PM UTC

      im enjoying writing this so much!!! thank you for reading!! :3c

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    2. OnlyAll0Saw on Chapter 8 Wed 25 Jan 2023 06:19PM UTC

      A pine valley glows green in the light of a curiously mycological nuclear explosion.

      I usually don’t do well with MB love stories (and tbh the romance (while impressively crafted!) isn’t a draw for me) but the AI pet-related ineptitude (inpetitude?) is a GLOWING CRYSTAL DRIVE OF BRILLIANT TASTY MIND SEASONING. I love this fanfic so much. Specifically, You are extremely talented at those little momentary will battles, for example: “[eye contact/my eyes/ART: lumens for blindness?/closed eyes].” It’s fantastic and I’m delighted to see the next installment. Well done!

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      1. beeayy on Chapter 8 Thu 26 Jan 2023 08:18PM UTC

        Oh gosh! Best compliment ever! XD lol thank you for reading even if its out of your usual way.
        YES WILL BATTLES I like to explore power dynamics but only in the silliest situations. Everyones a clown XD

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        1. OnlyAll0Saw on Chapter 8 Fri 27 Jan 2023 11:51PM UTC

          A pine valley glows green in the light of a curiously mycological nuclear explosion.

          The pleasure is firmly mine. (Just eh…. Not THAT kind of pleasure ^_^)

          Re wills: I also really appreciate the way you have, by having ART take the role of all the staff at once, brought out a sense of the very real power subordinates can have over a leader - especially one that doesn’t view itself as superior.

          Anyway, I love it and thank you for writing!

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          1. beeayy on Chapter 8 Fri 03 Feb 2023 07:41PM UTC

            There's so many fun things your can do with that kind of stuff X) thank you again for reading! More soon

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