Comment on Yearning the Shadow of the Moon and Befriending the Sunshine

1. kaitheplaguerat on Chapter 1 Tue 07 Mar 2023 06:33AM UTC

   

   i mean if we want to add more suffering to enid than just wednesday, you can also have the confidant just be absolutely fuckin’ incensed with her. because yes, enid ignoring wednesday is fair, but in the end all refusing to talk to wednesday anymore did was cause enid more heartbreak and just straight up kill wednesday. wonderful mix of guilt and self-hatred and devastation potential there. because at what point does being justified lose any value?
   the point at which the girl you like dies for your hurt feelings.
   anyways. it could be fun. no pressure, of course

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2. 1. lossair on Chapter 1 Sun 22 Oct 2023 05:12AM UTC

      

      Letting you know, if you weren't aware, that ummm... they're suffering after part I. There has been 4 more parts added since and they are both suffering more and more per parts. If you were aware, please ignore this comment :). I just want my readers to get a more satisfying's ending compared to the one-shot I initially created.

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