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  1. This was so good ! The end with the green an vle gods was so soothing and nice !! It makes me want to read read the end poem too!! You nailed the tone so well !!!

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    1. ty ty, was very proud of the green and blue text. the end poem is such a wonderful piece of literature so I'm honored you think I nailed the tone with my own version!

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