I'd love to hear where this story was going... Based off of how the main toad is named Mendax, I bet he would've betrayed us at some point. Don't know why or how, but he just would. (I read Latin, lol) Other than that, I don't know how this story would've gone at all.
It was pretty well written, though. Whatever you're doing now, I hope you still like writing. :]
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Squib1219 on Chapter 3 Tue 04 Apr 2023 03:16AM UTC
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