OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH SO FAR!!!! first i just want to say i love how you write dream!!! they are so fun and goofy and chaotic and i am IN LOVE with how you wrote them and wrote the way they interact with each other!!! gosh wow i just am really really in love with how you write them, thank you for writing them like this 😭😭💖 theres a lot to say about them, but i'll just touch on it cus i have more things to talk about !! first i love that theyre all ghosts that have passed away during different times, so interesting!! i think my favorite is mark's story! idk him being born then and having a walkman is just SO HIM plus him dying from falling off a wall 😭😭 i also laughed so hard at the "sup bro" message XD i was trying SO HARD to figure out who wrote that and i cant believe i didnt realize it was mark lol!
chenle is a CUTIE in this and i giggled so much at mark and chenle squealing and smacking each other over the radio working XD hyuck IS SO SILLY i love that he took one look at jeno and was like THATS MY MAN RIGHT THERE lmao also jaemin?!?! first i ADORE how jaemin interacts with jisung, calling him his jisungie 🥺💖 i see hes very soft and just happy to have another friend and i love that :( the way he didnt ask jisung for anything cus he was just happy hes there, and the way he watches everyone softly!!! also i love hearing about their past (i mean it is sad but also im a sucker for ghosts talking about how they died) and the way jaemin was like oh i got stabbed like so long ago, but thanks for wanting to help XD
gonna talk a little about nosung before i move onto renjun!! first jeno is SO sweet and you can tell he is willing to do anything for jisung :( (like hes fixing a big HOUSE for jisung like dang) and the fact he cried over jisung (i cant believe he actually DIED for a moment omg) and how hes making sure hes ok like every second when they get back to the house!! we love a caring boy!! and i love how excited jisung is to have this house and also hes such a curious boy!! also his past seems sad? with his parents dying when he was young :( i cant wait to learn more about all of them and their past <3 im very excited to keep reading and im actually happy this is broken into chapters so i can comment on as much as possible without it being in one lonnnggg comment at the end lmao!
now renjun!!! oh my GOSH i am in love with the story you have going with him. first i was kinda squinting my eyes and going ok, which one of yall pushed jisung off the roof XD and ahhh its so interesting that it might be renjun because at first i thought it might have been an accident but i have a feeling it was more than that, especially with jaemin hinting that his uncle killed him for the house and good thing nobodies trying to kill jisung over it 😭 im very excited to learn more!! i know renjun wouldnt try to harm anybody unless he was kind of scared or territorial? i mean hes lived here for so long and im sure he doesnt want anything to happen to him or the others but i also know his intentions werent to KILL jisung (although im kind of curious if he had something to do with marks death too?) im very excited to learn more!!! its also interesting since jisung has no memory of the event? soooooo ahh im excited! also i did find it cute that renjun was like "you really got me a book 🥺" like hes so idk i just wanna cuddle him when he said it like that, i need to give him the WORLD tbh ALSO jisung was SO considerate when he bought renjun different options to read too and it seems renjun was sorta conflicted at the kindness at the end XD
anyways WOW i am in LOVE with this so far and i cant wait to read more!!! i actually picked out so many cute lines i loved in this, there were just so many parts that made me laugh or smile!! thank you for this!!
i absolutely love your commentary on all the characters, I went all out making them silly and goofy to fit the concept and i do think it remains some of my best 7dream dynamics to date, i LOVE how much you love the details like their time periods and jaemin's affection for them!! RENJUN IS JUST TOUCHED BY THE BOOK!!
I hope you enjoy the rest lovely!! im so glad you're enjoying so far ❤❤
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