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  1. >>> I landed Hero my p-photo album
    *lended

    - don’t use acronyms in formal writing, such as yk

    - don’t apologize for things in the fic, do that in the notes section

    - try to see if you can get a beta reader?

    - it’s violin, not violo

    - for all of the mistakes i pointed out, you’re doing pretty great for someone who’s first language isn’t english!

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    1. thank you for pointing out the mistake!

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