Yeah, I really don't mind complaints! Anything that is pointed out to me is something I can improve on, after all.
For the no killing, I think it was to make the few kills she does make stand out, since they were all supposed to be major plot points, and sending her on the warpath right off the bat would make those moments have a lot less of an impact. Of course, just because something's intended doesn't always make up for the actual effect that it's achieved; if it's more annoying than it's worth, I'll be more than happy to reconsider my stance, though it's likely not going to matter in the coming chapters.
Personally, I'd like to believe that it's mostly Morgan and Laurent who handled most of the tactical maneuvering, and she handled more of the leadership stuff. Perhaps I've written her to be a bit too simple, and I could probably stand to make her a lot more proactive, but in my defense, there's a difference between knowing when to make a call and how to make it, if that makes sense. And it's not like she's been deprived of all brainpower. She has a few moments, even if they are all solely concentrated in the parts where I actually knew what I was doing.
The title really is just something I've gotten attached to. I still do plan on delivering–it just took a long time to get there because of, again, really poor planning. Probably not the best attitude to have, but I've been too busy as of late to think of any new ones. If you have any suggestions, I'm all ears lol
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AnPresonPeepul on Chapter 27 Tue 18 Jul 2023 11:38PM UTC
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