Comment on Where Land meets Sea.

  1. Folk_T on Chapter 1 Wed 26 Jul 2023 07:13AM UTC

    Yep, one lucky shot at the worst location possible the magazine.How could I make the connection better?.

    Last Edited Wed 26 Jul 2023 07:14AM UTC

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    1. knight7272 on Chapter 1 Wed 26 Jul 2023 07:17AM UTC

      I'd suggest if Lena was the symbol of the resistance for a period of time, she could better understand Hood's burden of being the Pride of the Royal Navy which is the title Hood held until she was sunk

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      1. Folk_T on Chapter 1 Wed 26 Jul 2023 07:19AM UTC

        Thank you for the idea and the Feedback. Also thank you for all your comments, they are every helpful.

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        1. knight7272 on Chapter 1 Wed 26 Jul 2023 07:40AM UTC

          Hood was never meant to be the last battlecruiser or the most powerful ship in the world or the only 1 of her Admiral Class

          Her class was suppose to be 4 ships, Hood, King George 5's sisters Howe and Anson and Nelson's sister Rodney were suppose to have been Hood's sisters.

          when i say Hood was never meant to be the most powerful ship in the world for as long as she was, well it is true, Hood would have only been the most powerful ship until the ships that were suppose to be more powerful following behind her came online

          Those were the G3 & N3 of the British Empire, Tosa and Kaga of the Tosa Class, Amagi and Akagi and their sisters of Amagi Class, Kii, Suruga and their sisters of Kii Class of Imperial Japan and the 1920 South Dakota and Lexington class of the United States but these ships were killed off by the Washington Naval Treaty

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        2. knight7272 on Chapter 1 Wed 26 Jul 2023 07:41AM UTC

          no problem

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