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  1. Lisa (Guest) on Chapter 10 Wed 09 Aug 2023 07:07AM UTC

    I love that you give Mashima's characters personality. Some of them are so plain. While Juvia, Gray and Gajeel are very on point, Jose has a different vibe than the original, at least to me. Your version feels less boring, less stereotype, less "well, we need a villain here". I can understand Juvia's conflict although Jose's so cleary abusive and egocentric.
    On to the next chapter and have a wonderful day!

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