It is good to know it’s getting tiring, I’ve been specifically on the fence abt that, it’s kind of hard to tell. And it’s sort of smth I wanted to avoid. But that’s where the narrative and character arcs felt like they needed to go. I’m really trying to make it all make sense internally, which yeah sometimes doesn’t follow an efficient story structure so the pacing might be… eh. Open to constructive criticim ofc.
As for the J thing, you’re absolutely right that N wouldn’t go back to her if she was only ever mean.
Remember that conversation N and Uzi had, when he sort of reached out a little bit? It was Uzi who said J was only ever mean, and so he shouldn’t have any reason to question if she was his friend. And most of the fic is from Uzi’s perspective. N’s reaction to that statement is an important one.
There will be a part 2, and it actually goes into this a bit more, with a hopefully changed-enough situation that it’s not too grating lmao If you lose interest, though, no worries. I know I can’t please everyone. Especially if it hits too close to home in a bad way. Take care of yourself, you come first 💖💖
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Icchasaki on Chapter 49 Tue 05 Sep 2023 05:55AM UTC
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