Excellent story! After reading the stories of 'Return of Flash', 'A snake's obsession', 'Nidaime no Sairin' and 'The Right Path' your story seems like a combination of all of them. I can't wait to read on how you would incorporate them. Please don't abandon the story. I have high hopes for it.
Thank you so much. Yeah I’d read those stories and went “hey these are all good ideas, but what would happen if I just incorporate a lot of these elements into one story?” And this came about. For the time being I’m having Naruto hold back a bit and also, he has training but his experience is zero, meaning hes still not exactly strong enough. Im still going through wave arc (spoilers) so hopefully be end of this week i might post tbe graduation part. Lets just say Neji wont be having a good time in the chunin exams. Also, The Right Path was such a good story. I was sad when it ended in just three chapters.
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