Okay okay first of all, hell yes to the world-building and design and complicatedly intriguing omegaverse setup. Like. It's wonderful, beautiful. (Like the descriptions of Jason -- his personality, his fighting style, all on point)
The storyline too has me absolutely hooked. As soon as Apollo said they were going after red hood, I think I screamed a little because I wasn't sure if we were going to get red hood or not (either way, I'd be happy but YESSS)
The thing I'm honestly getting all goo-goo eyed for is Mid's POV The little reminders of how he thinks, and what he might think about. I'm so happy you including his little speech (i love that man for it). How he sees Apollo, how he sees Jason. How he thinks in numbers and technical terms. (How he's all screwed up because hes not accounting for Red Hood being an omega) Like I love him, it, all of it
Jack, thank you so much for your lovely comment! I'd have sworn that I replied to you back when I read it because I absolutely loved it, but obviously I didn't. I've been so terrible at replying to comments for such a long while!
you've not idea how happy it makes me that you liked the story. It was such a fun one to write and I can't thank you enough for inspiring it!
I'm so happy you including his little speech (i love that man for it).
That man needs to brag about his skills! I love that for him, too! Also, now Jason can tease him forever and ever that his supercomputer still didn't help the one time it mattered 😈
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