Comment on Cyborg Luz on the Boiling isles : Believe in miracles

1. EllieMi on Chapter 1 Thu 12 Oct 2023 07:19PM UTC

   

   Thanks I wrotte that first chapter on my phone, will do the next ones on my puter it will be better for me to do something better. I will check grammarly thanks for the advice.

   Also yes I'm crual

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2. 1. Hivemindtime on Chapter 1 Thu 12 Oct 2023 10:58PM UTC

      

      *cruel

      also, this could help with grammar and English in general.

      https://www.grammarbook.com/english_rules.asp

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