Arlen (Guest)
on Chapter 7
Mon 25
Jul 201610:13PM UTC
I had a feeling you were likely a loner-ish type of person as well, given how you put so many relatable details about all of Sniper's actions, and reasons why he refused to take action in situations. But I didn't wanna be like "OH, KINSMAN! WE ARE THE SAME!". I think it might've been... maybe rude? To just assume. Since making assumptions is never really a good thing. xD And OHHH! Yes! I was hoping I was right about it! Are you going to work that into the next chapter, then? I'd like to see how Sniper would handle knowing he hit Sout by mistake. o__o That would make for a great scene! Also, I didn't mention this in ky earlier comment, but Scout and Pyro hugging so good-naturedly like they've ben friends for many years was powerfully adorable. xD
I don't know if I'll be able to work that in or not! I've started on it already, but I just can't tell. I might be able to, I'll just have to see where it leads me. And Pyro and Scout are definitely good pals in my story :)
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