Comment on The Stark project of a French pragmatic dreamer (SI/ISOT)

  1. To answer your question, no. It is more how I would express myself. Maybe there are others who would speak in that way, but I did not have the chance to interact with them or to encounter them.

    I'll see what I can do with the dialogues. I can easily work on those of my character, but those of the canonical characters will trickier to tackle (even though I can check what informations or words would redundant, needless or irrelevant at least or even find ways to change those dialogues lines in something more "organic" and closer to the characters' mindset (in regards of the context)).

    Thank you for your comment.

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