Hey, so... It took me a good while to muster up courage to ask this, but... is there any chance you could write another few things about what you think about my little "character study"? It's completely up to you to do so, because the last thing I want is for this to feel like an obligation, which it isn't. But I feel like it would give me a huge boost, y'know? Something to look forward to in future chapters. I just love seeing long comments, they make me feel recognized. Apologies if this sounds extremely selfish on my part, I take full responsibility for that. But regardless of what you decide to do, I will respect your choice without any complaint or rebuttal. Thanks for understanding.
Hey look I would be MORE then happy. Seriously writing essays about random things is my jam. Like I said I think my favourite part of it is that with almost every single one I can fully 100% hear the chacaters voice. Like Pomegranate just pointing at Licorice or Red Velvet and being like "revive that one" while being very pissed off you NAILED her particularly. Also Vampire is one of my favourites as well but I mentioned that. Strawberry Crepe was also perfect imo, probably helped by the fact if Crepe met Shenron I can imagine they would make any one of these wishes. The links made to cannon are also pretty cool (Blackberries revival wish, Dark Chocos immortality wish, all of Knights wishes). It lends to the realism. I'm definitely biased twoard Mango since he's my favourite character but his reason for immortality would 1000% be "I want to find more cool stuff". The whole "soul jam instead of immortality" thing is a GREAT concept especially considering the recent update involving Golden Cheese. I can't help but wonder about her and Dark Cacao in paticular. Like I said there's plenty of the revival ones in particular where I can imagine who is being revived but I'm citing more because if it wasn't blatantly obvious I find that variety (plus immortality) the most interesting. Milk and Yam reviving eachother, Princess and Knight doing the same, Chilli Pepper reviving Custard (chance for me to mention Chillis was another stand out in terms of how in character it was), Almond reviving Latte or Rougefourt (he would 100% tell either of them to get up because the work wasn't finished), Red Velvet doing it for a single cake because he would do that lets be honest here. And plus, again, Angel and Devil reviving eachother because I will never let that headcannon die. Of course I have no idea if any of these were what you intended (Yam could be reviving Dark Choco to beat the crap out of him again for all I know) but it's cool how they are (And I feel the need to keep saying this because in chacater fics are hard to come by) all so in chacater but all the wishes are up to so much interpretation. The concept is very unique but also pushes the chacaters in a really interesting way that would get someone thinking like what have they done to get to the point the need to make a wish to be healed? What has that character in particular gotten themselves into and it varries so much depending on who your looking at. Pomegranate probably got it fighting for Dark Entrantress sure but how did Parfait get herself into that much of a predicament? Did she somehow get chronic pain and can't play anymore or decide to get involved in the war? If its the second reason, why? I think it's such a great writing exercise because a huge chunk of the responses get you thinking. Sea Fairies wishes in paticular, I feel like she would be on the fence for immortality, probably fearing she would inevitable outlive the moon. (Also, I don't think Shenron could fix her heart at this point you need Super Shenron and some heavy duty flex tape for that) Also if I had to pick a favourite set of wishes, definitely Vampire. You both nailed down his personality and I like the lazy damage dealer. I'm so glad that my dumb little paragraph comment inspired you tho, and I hope this was what you were looking for :D
CONSIDER THIS FIC OFFICIALLY OUT FROM HIATUS, BECAUSE IT'S COMING BACK. Ahem, but really, you have no idea how happy reading ALL of this just made me. I'm grateful that you find time out of your day to comment on my character study fic (which was a joke fic at first, to be completely honest) and find some enjoyment in the process! For you, and all the possible future readers who decide to give their feedback/criticism, I'll get back to work on this! Thank you for your time, essay, and inspiration to keep working on this.
AYO NO PROBLEM I'm so happy I've inspired you to this point??? I ain't dropping this I'm gonna keep writing damn essays on future chapters just you wait.
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