It's so spliced, take it back to the drawing board, the concept sound so fun, execution is poor. To explain it in visual terms, the original story is a single sheet of paper that was cut into rectangles and then glitter glue was used to put the page back together and that's it. Good luck.
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Nataribaez on Chapter 3 Sat 04 Nov 2023 10:28PM UTC
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