Okay, so... this is funny, because I was driving myself crazy wondering where your comment was *on the chapter*, and I was trying to figure out if there was some weird bug that randomly erases comments... and then I saw that you somehow left this on chapter 1, instead of on chapter 21. XD
Anyway, yay! I will have to add you on my nano profile (which I haven't even visited this year... oops)!
I really read Lucy as being a ride-or-die kind of girl, so it just makes sense for her to latch on to the admirable qualities of her companions. Also, being raised as she was, it's not surprising that she completely glosses over her own abilities to a certain extent. She thinks that her Talent is the only special thing about her, without realizing that she doesn't put other people in that same box.
... I'll admit that I have no idea if the exercises and treatment that I gave Lucy would actually work or be recommended for someone with a broken hand, I'm just going on what I was told for my broken angle. I *think* they would overlap somewhat, but I'm not at all sure and didn't actually look anything up. (I might put a disclaimer in the AN, actually...)
I'm glad you liked the AA team! I worked hard on that whole... situation.
I probably won't have Lockwood be jealous in this fic. That's more of a show interpretation, and I actually really like how he *doesn't* act jealous or entitled to her attention/Talents in the books. Does he take her for granted before Aickmeres? Maybe unintentionally, but that's not really the same thing as being jealous.
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I must have had a senior moment 😅 Yeah, we’re going to go ahead and acknowledge that if you don’t have a comment from me, I haven’t read it yet (and I like to try to read it when it drops if I can!). Your work is always so engaging!
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