I really really really liked this AU!!! I mean, all your other ficlets are honestly great (really great I love your characterization!), but I felt like I had to comment on this one in particular! I know it's an X-Men AU, but it really gave me Percy Jackson! camp counselor vibes?? It's my favorite book series and I just love how you described Pep here "...Pep had been barely more than a kid himself, gangling and bright-eyed in his Cruyff Was Right T-shirt, the three-ringed Psionic-and-Proud badge pinned so prominently on his collar it felt like a shout." and how you gave a small nod to how strong he is "As if a napkin could stop a cruise missile." Anyways, I just wanted to say, again that I really enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing! C:
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2davidbeckham3 on Chapter 4 Wed 03 Aug 2016 02:02AM UTC
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