Comment on A Flash Of Subelements- The Senju Uzumaki Heir

  1. "Half an hour later, Naruto sat eating his dinner on his dining table in his apartment. The cooking book the Hokage had provided was invaluable, allowing him to cook food for himself. He and his clone made sure to follow the instructions word for word, and the results were worth eating. ‘I might have some natural aptitude for cooking, otherwise I would have already blown the kitchen up.’ He mused."

    Minor inconsistency here, Naruto just unlocked his chakra so he shouldn't have the Shadow Clone Jutsu or any clone jutsu for that matter learned already.

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    1. Thanks for pointing that out. DIdnt notice till now. It was part of the first time I tried writing the story and forgot to remove that part while rewriting the entire thing. Thanks again

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