Comment on The Angel of Konoha

  1. MyOpCharacter on Chapter 14 Mon 20 Nov 2023 06:34PM UTC

    You are absolutely right, sorry I write so many stories that I kind of forgot about the age. Promise it will much later.

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    1. A530 on Chapter 14 Mon 20 Nov 2023 06:47PM UTC

      That's quite a relief, I'm also thankful you didn't take it as rude or something.

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      1. MyOpCharacter on Chapter 14 Mon 20 Nov 2023 07:17PM UTC

        No it was a helpful comment, thanks again

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    3. Saiko_no_Kami on Chapter 14 Tue 21 Nov 2023 06:44PM UTC

      Wait... Was it a mistake?...
      I mean, I understand the other person's point about the ages, but given how you "play" with Naruto being a civilian and not a shinobi and more for the type of story it is, I thought it was implied that as a ninja, and more of a clan, they would clearly be guided by their desires, since according to the story they are considered adults...
      My point with this, is that while it's understandable that it makes some people uneasy because they are minors, if that limits the story it's a bit disappointing... And I'm not saying this because I hope there will be a scene like that, but because I found Neji's dialogue so natural and in accordance with his personality, that if now because someone mentioned that he is worried because of his age you avoid him, it's a bit annoying.

      Of course, it's just an opinion, as there is the person who worries him, so is the one who doesn't (as long as there is some justification).... And whatever you do, it's a very good story.

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      1. MyOpCharacter on Chapter 14 Wed 22 Nov 2023 11:52AM UTC

        I of course also write "smutty" stuff with underage, but most like 15-16 upwards.

        The problem isn’t that someone was uncomfortable, it was that I really had lost their age while writing.

        The planning of the story was already that Naruto saw Neji as a kid, immature and not someone of the same level, mentally.

         

        Thanks again for these kind of comments, it shows me that the readers really care about the story. ☺️

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