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  1. WrittenAffinity on Chapter 6 Mon 04 Dec 2023 05:10AM UTC

    I'm so glad you liked it! And that you are enjoying the trio, I'm getting a kick out of writing them. Yea though, I felt bad making her fight, but it was going to happen anyway. I am glad you picked up the hint there about iroh leaving her coins! I had to portray it from Azula's pov. Its important to me that everything from a characters POV is their own unique interpretation of events so I'm not going to outright say things that happen, I'm doing my best to let my characters voices bleed into the writing and let it go from there. I wonder if you have picked up on any foreshadowing that I have done XD. I'm working on Chpater 7 which has been a doozy, since its getting to be quite long - I'm struggling with splitting it vs not. I'm trying to wrangle it out by this upcoming weekend so I hope you enjoy it!

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    1. Mania666 on Chapter 6 Thu 21 Dec 2023 06:12PM UTC

      Hi, I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier, but I had really busy few weeks. I wanted to reread this chapter, because I must admit I don't think I had picked up on hints for chapter 7. Now I'm still not sure if my guesses would be right, sorry 😅 Maybe, Kota and Tonaq find out about her true identity or team will meet Zhao or Bumi in Omashu. Anyway, I find out in few minutes xd
      One more thing, I love how Azula is protective of boys. For now she see it more as means to an end, but it's a good start. And it's a little funny because she is younger than them xd.

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