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  1. jamyamjar on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Dec 2023 09:46PM UTC

    BANGING MY FISTS ON MY KNEES SCREAMING FROM THE ROOFTOPS WHAT THE EVERLOVING ACTUAL HECK ALIZEH

    IM. im SO GONE for the QUALITY of the pacing?? it is soso.. amazing how well-placed the time skips are & the places in which u extend scenes & provide introspection &.. GAH. what a THING.

    ALSO i love u using their superhero names to refer to whether or not theyre transformed/how theyre presenting themself?? like thats such an amazing lil detail which rlly speaks to their identity dynamics in GENERAL &.. yea!

    just. a LOT of things in this fic just speak to their identity dynamics & its so cool! like lb referring to herself as "alley cat"? like WHAT a chat noir influenced moment. its fics like This that rlly make me sick abt their history together bc.. u just MASTERFULLY interwove it through so much of this fic both indirectly & directly & its so. cool to read. i LOVE how u write them djrkthke

    & dont even get me Started on how u depict the gravity of their loneliness.. im literally writing this FROM sitting on the ground eating lunch by myself bc my friends have other things to do & i love how u rlly acknowlegded that tension between their desires! like the desire to be happy for their friends & pursue their individual interests vs the desire to just BE with them comes across so Well as an underlying & Overlying heartbreak. oh my god.

    (i dont know overlying is even a a word!!! it is not my fault i have to invent vocabulary to even try describe how Briliant this is!!!!!!)

    i literally am so enthralled & i will now b ZOOMING to read the next chapter i LOVE u

    Last Edited Thu 14 Dec 2023 09:50PM UTC

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    1. alizeh (maketea) on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Dec 2023 11:39PM UTC

      HI I LITERALLY LOVE YOU SO MUCH??? i was feeling kind of tired and didnt want to edit my chapter today but as soon as i got the email for this i just took a deep breath and opened the doc because it gave me such a burst of energy. you are so so lovely and your wonderful energy is so contagious and sjdkdks. you are such a blessing. im laying my life down for you

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