Comment on Au Clair de Lune

  1. flavouredice Fri 05 Jan 2024 01:19AM UTC

    This fic was such a treat to read! 💕 I loved how Shoko immediately pegged how Gojo would want to immediately seek out Yuuji. 😆 Their reunion scene was my absolute favorite part. I loved how their hands found each other so naturally and Gojo kissed Yuuji's wrist. 🥺🤲 You captured the depth of their bond and emotions beautifully.

    I also loved all the gorgeous descriptions of the moonlight, camellias, and landscapes fully immersed me in each moment. And constantly bringing up and using the night/moon to bookend sections created such a haunting, cohesive flow. 🖤

    So many heartfelt touches -- Gojo missing Yuuji's red clothes, Yuuji's reaction to the flowers, the symbolism of switching from the yellow camellia to the red one. 😔💔 You packed this fic with so much emotion and meaning.

    Thank you for sharing this poignant, stunning story! The characterizations, relationships, and your writing were all amazing. ✨

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