Wauw "impressive" isn't quite a term I ever expected to see applied to an aspect of this story heh... It's a very positive surprise to be sure though. I am also very happy ofc to hear that V and Thad's dynamic clicks.
Also yes, snuggles are in the plans for the end :3
The feedback on the Red Sixes scenes is very much appreciated. I must admit I had a bit of a lazy approach when writing them. They indeed were meant to primarily be an exposition dump for info I thought was needed to be conveyed to avoid confusion but didn't have an idea on how to put in Thad's or V's POV. I wrote these maybe too hastily but the lack of opinions on them had left me with an impression they were at least decent at what they were meant for. Now that you pointed them out though I am starting to see how I could have handled this better.
I'm happy that at least Kelly/bait-girl came out well ^_^ Hopefully I will be able to keep her likeable as I include her in future chapters.
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Chinerpeton on Chapter 6 Sat 20 Jan 2024 08:20PM UTC
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