Comment on Half Drunk on a Twin Size Bed

  1. selkathyouth Sat 27 Jan 2024 07:39PM UTC

    Wait this is soooooo good you're a great writer! So excited that you're writing domitrent and also are working on a LONG fic about them????? AND you wrote this fic in less than 24 hours? :)

    I love how you captured the development of Dom's feelings and his and Trent's dynamic. Even in the condensed 2k words of the fic it felt perfectly gradual and realistic. Plus your characterization is spot on, too, and how you wrote their dialogue felt so natural and flirtatious and made me smile.

    Thank you for this! Really looking forward to your longer fic and whatever else you write next!

    Comment Actions

    1. HalfAcre Sun 28 Jan 2024 12:04AM UTC

      Thank you for this comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

      You'll certainly be getting a long fic from me at some point, but when is anyone's guess. It just keeps growing.

      Comment Actions