An amazing start, I have many things to say... 1-Chungwoo definitely has the type to take all of his older brother's sloppy speeches and turn them into a manual for life. 2-The interactions between Gunwoo and his mother and Gunwoo and his half-siblings (I'm dying to love the whole unicorn teeth story) are absolutely beautiful. 3-The way Cheongwoo's mother comes in and her attitudes towards Gunwoo is... well, really embarrassing, it's a grown woman being cruel to a child in a way that almost seems like an evil stepmother from a fairy tale. The father is no better (I think all the fathers in this story will be terrible) I mean, he couldn't even say anything, that was his son and he let them say all those things to him right in front of him, pretty pathetic. 4-I love that Cheongwoo and Gunwoo, despite the circumstances, really know each other so well and recognize each other's mannerisms and preferences. 5-"A...veiled middle finger fit for a prickly queen?" in this part... I think I know which prickly queen Gunwoo was referring to, sorry Cheongwoo. 6-Tell me that idiot isn't going to blackmail them by publishing their family relationships, that kind of scandal would be crazy.
1. x'D the others are subtle but I hope it gets through. But all in all, yes.
2. AAAAAAHHHHH thank you so much!!! ; v ; It's one of my fav scenes.
3. To be fair, I didn't really thought much of the father in terms of his personality, but he's patterned as a more detached version of canon Chungwoo who's married to his work. xD But you're absolutely right that he's pathetic as a father... actually, as a man as well.
I wanted to say that Ahyeon has a good dad but he won't be appearing anyway hahaha.
4. Thank you! I wanted to show more of those, to be honest. It's just a bit difficult at times to find a place where it could fit well with the flow.
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