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1. OneOfEachEye on Chapter 1 Wed 21 Feb 2024 01:22AM UTC

   

   Alright, I've updated the story with some more details on the Monarchs. Let me know what you think.

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2. 1. Scrizz on Chapter 1 Wed 21 Feb 2024 06:57AM UTC

      

      Love the stuff like the Doc Ock and Generator Rex references, that one specifically was a deep cut for me. And love the idea of Akane making the Thieves doubt who they can trust is another great idea. Along with the kaiju robot. Akane could use her cloaking tech to look like her Shadow too.
      Basically it's all great.

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