It's funny that you wish you could make yours longer when I'm here wishing I could make them shorter and also that they'd take a shorter time to write. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Also, yeah, I should've caught that with Rodney. I was so caught up in writing him as an idiot that I totally forgot that he'd know that at the very least. As for the beach episode... It goes in a direction. And that's all I'll say for now. I'm also trying to think of whatever other references I made in this chapter that I didn't mention in the notes.
I’m sure you’ll find a good balance on chapter length. I’m very interested to see where you’ll be going from here. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
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