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  1. Yum Mkulia (Guest) on Chapter 8 Sun 10 Mar 2024 09:44PM UTC

    Holy FUCK
    Okay so I’ve limited myself from commenting on this thing because, well, I would be insanely late, but considering this is the most recent chapter I think this is the perfect timing to comment.

    So far, this story is absolutely amazing. The looming presence of Jason Bell was unsettling and the inner conflict of Ravi (and Cara) is so incharacter.

    And, I know you’re trying to make us hate Hawkins, but I just love the way you portray him in this fic. In the books he’s (sadly) kinda boring in my eyes. (Not boring boring but boring compared to other characters featured in the book) But in this fic he’s a bitter, angry man who resents Pip for doing what he couldn’t. For making a ‘fool’ out of him. His anger and hatred of Pip in this fic is boosted to the max and I love it.

    I’m super super SUPER excited to see more coming from this fic and from you yourself!

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    1. SmallSinger on Chapter 8 Sun 10 Mar 2024 10:03PM UTC

      AH THANK YOU! Comments like these are really often the thing i need to give me that little spike of motivation for writing, so please don’t feel discouraged from commenting on mine or anyone else’s fics just because of when they were posted! (No pressure tho… lol)
      And AAAAA im so happy you like Hawkin’s arc here! It was honestly a lot of fun to look at his character and reimagine how his story would change based on Pip’s decisions.

      And im ALSO ALSO happy that you think Ravi and Cara are staying in character :D

      The next chapter should hopefully be out in the next 7-10 days, definitely by the end of the month at the absolute latest!

      <333333

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