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  1. Kira OHara (KiraOHara) on Chapter 2 Sat 22 Mar 2014 11:26PM UTC

    My Plotbunnies Say, "Write Me, Bitch!" - Cute and Fluffy and Maiming My Life

    This is insufferably cute. No, seriously, I am suffering from cheeks that hurt from smiling too much. XDDD

    Wee!Derek is so adorable! Grr, Peter, GRRRRRRR. And OMG, Stiles just crawling right in the den. XD The sheriff's reaction killed me. XDDD

    (Itty-bitty thing, but you had Papa Hale's name as Manson and Mason (unless they were meant to be two different people?). And who's George? O.o I would have thought it would be Talia and Ma(n)son who had sent Laura to the daycare... Just piping in, since at the speed you're giving us these gems I kinda doubt there's time for a beta. ;3)

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    1. Sarageek16 on Chapter 2 Sun 23 Mar 2014 12:25AM UTC

      Lol thank you! And thank you for catching the errors, I need a beta like burning :).

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