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  1. Alittleredjacket on Chapter 1 Thu 21 Mar 2024 01:44PM UTC

    Ahhh!!! I love absolutely love the way you write all these characters!

    And the way you changed the rankings around actually makes so much more sense to me. It did always seem a little weird that there were never other people in the GAR working in the line with the clones, so that's neat to see as well!

    Cal is just so cute, but the fact that he needs better shields to protect Jaro from his pre-teen angst is hilarious.

    Can't wait to read the rest!!

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    1. Pixelfun20 on Chapter 1 Thu 21 Mar 2024 10:15PM UTC

      Thank you so much! Since the only major canon character we've really got here is Cal (and even then, this is pre-trauma Cal), I was able to dig into these characters that we get little tastes of but are never able to really see. I'm very excited to continue, especially with Jaro. He ended up being really interesting to write!

      Oh, you know that the crechemasters had to have had the STRONGEST mental shields known to man. All those little babies projecting their every whim to the force... it had to take a strong Jedi to handle that.

      Next chapter will be out tomorrow! I'm excited to see what people think of baby Cal's POV :)

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