I love how this panned out. I knew that someone’s lecherous mind was going to lead them fall to the pillow pit although to be precise, it was Sarah’s kiss that made them fall. I’m so glad that was the case. We always hear of true love’s kiss breaking the spell, either from sleep or something else. Having the person (in this case, Jareth) actually desire you (Sarah) breaking out the spell to truly see you is unique and awesome. It was so sweet.
The dancers being his insecurities makes sense. We all have these battles with ourselves and I’d hate to see mine personified. I love that they’d never truly hurt Sarah. So glad they’re out now, at least I assume. Can’t wait to see them chat!
Thank you, girl, so very much. 💕xx You really put me to work this morning🙄🤣
Yeah, what's better than a kiss to addle his mind and break the status quo. Sonething he never expected.😁 And I did want it to contain some fairly tale elements, so the kiss was almost a must. It had to be her doing it and taking the initiative. It was the only way.
I'm glad you appreciated the dancers signifying his insecurities and dark thoughts and were nothing more than phantoms. That was the hook I told you earlier about.
Not all is quite well yet. One last obstacle. You'll see.😉😁💞
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