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1. OneSilverLight on Chapter 3 Tue 02 Apr 2024 12:05AM UTC

   

   Love to see sins scheming. Also i dont know why but im always so surprised when they admit to doing something that happened in the previous chaps even though that would be the most logical conclusion. Like my brain reading soemthing bad happening like the nightmares is all: hmm what could it beeee 🤔 ???

   Slso mysterious ancient entity is AWAKE

    

   

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2. 1. Naysmith on Chapter 3 Tue 02 Apr 2024 01:03AM UTC

      

      Thanks. I'm debating whether to keep showing their plots or move it entirely to the Ancient Shadow (flesh that one out) and make it harder for people to guess who's being controlled.

      EDIT: On consideration, I'll probably keep them, but I don't want the to be too transparent going forwards.

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