(whistling in amazement 😯!) Wow what a way to start this chapter! 😁.
So..... considering in the last chapter she didn't recognize her father's picture. This means she couldn't remember him or any of their memories. So does the memory recall at the start of the chapter resulted from the refresher she had seeing her dad's picture? Or Was it meant in the last chapter that she did remember/recognize her father but she couldn't believe her eyes when she saw his pic 👀? Or It her memories were came to her as a dream that's why she can't remember anything further? ..........
“I know it’s not, Feather.” Is it Aerrow's father name/new character? Or it's meant to be father? 👀
"Aerrow crept along the kitchen cupboards, silent as a mouse." Lol i really loved that line!. The imagery 😆🐭. The whole scene was so good and very hilarious xD. Let the girl get the bowl!
".....will be our child inheriting these battles from us!” Ooh my heart 🥺!. Aerrow inherited it sadly. But the worst part is she lost her father despite all the efforts that were made to avoid this situation ಥ_ಥ.
"If he was taking Aerrow to safety, shouldn’t her mom be getting closer to the strange man, so that he could take her too?" Yesss! That's a good question indeed...why though 🤔. Why did the mom have to die (˘╭╮˘) ?
"Aerrow’s mother had another dagger in hand....started to move as soon as the other had left her hand....." Despite how sad and unfortunate the situation is (>﹏<), but......woooow that lady is so badass 😎. ...... Oof! That trip through the Memory lane was so Intense!!. Arrggh every memory brought tears to my eyes (╥﹏╥). ... And i liked how you seperated every part of paragraph/scene neatly. They are so easy to read and very comfy to the eyes ^^. Which reminds me that i need to write my comment in a neater/easier way to read. I'll try to do my best in organizing them ^^. I mean you totally deserve to read a neat one. Pardon my previous messy blocks of paragraphs 😅✌️
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"Please pardon any messes" Lady what the (...) Are you talking about?. That's a (...) Royal place!. It's like a dream comes true 🥺. So yeah I don't guess any of them would file any complaints xD.
".....so that you don’t get lost.” Lol how big is this castle ? 😂
"It was more that...started to get… hazy" Oh ok nvm my qs in the start of the comment 😂👌.
-"Aerrow took her chance to slip out of her borrowed room....". -"..crept along quickly but quietly..." Well....what can i say the girl had proper training/ practice when she was younger 🙄. {Remember her sneaking, trying to get that bowel from under under (lol the irony xD; she was creeping 'above' on the cupboards) her mom's nose 😁}.
- lol considering how 'vip' their guests were, and how the Rex guardians were so secretive about them. They put literally no effort in guarding the halls or even ensuring no one wanders around unaccompanied 🤣. Their security levels/techniques seem to be as old as their skimmers (when Ace in the show said: where did you get your rides. From a museum?)
-"...no symbol anywhere on their person to indicate who they were affiliated with...". -"... a staff, something that wasn’t commonly chosen...." The attention to details!. Absolutely love it!.
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“I’ve been waiting, Aerrow.” Ooh that dream! 😳. It was so intriguing!!. I'm very curious to see/find out more! 🫣. ......
-{“So what’s on the agenda?” Finn asked between bites of egg.} -{Piper wiped at her mouth with her napkin. “Well, Aerrow and I have to..."} I reeeaaallllly like the attention to details and character personalities right there!!!. (Finn would absolutely talk while eating. While Piper is more courtous and would finish her bite first, use a napkin, then talk/answer the question neatly).
"Finn squinted at her. “So… not something you’re going to need help with?” Lol so he was only building up to that question 😂. Well nice of you to think about helping Piper finn 😒.
-“Did Finn just willingly say he was going to train? On a day off?” -“He saw the female recruits practising there yesterday.” Lol Finn now we know how to make you get any job done 😂.
"Aerrow made sure to arrange a grin....just two teenage girls gossiping..." Smart move girlie. You definitely deserve your title 'sky knight', giving them the benefit of doubt 🤣🤣.
-“Shoo, shoo!” she scolded. “I’m a very busy girl....." I can't contain my giggles 🤣🤣. The whole Aerrow-Piper scene, conspiracing their plan was soooo hilarious xD.
-"Sky Knight Aerrow, wait for me! You might get lost!” Aaaand that line!. How can you read it without bursting into laughter 🤣. I could imagine the guard running after her in clumsy/goofy way while saying that line xD.
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The scene of Aerrow wondering through the city was so lovely and it was a very nice break from the building tension as the plot progresses ^^.
-"Piper spun in place, hand latching.....as she manhandled him...then shoved him....". -“Sorry, no boys allowed!” Aaaaaah i really love these scenes so much 😂👌. Imagine the dumbstruck expression on the guard's face xD.
"A muffling crystal was placed....lighting it up a soft shade of green." Oh i liked that details And your lore👀.
"Worst case scenario.....then they would have to admit they’ve been semi-spying on...." Oh Piper your so badass and mean and I'm here for it 😎👌.
-"Why force someone to learn how to fight with a sword when they fought better with a bow?" -"Although...this way of thinking also came with its own downsides. Afterall, if only one person on a team knew how to...." I like the argument and the counter argument!. And the in-depth details of each!.
"there are groups out there that do subscribe to the idea that everyone should use the same weapon..." Oh oooh!. Ah!. I like how the different mentality of assigning weapons reflects the way of thinking that nation holds!. For example cyclonia is more of oppressive in its way of ruling. So it makes sense they would force everyone to use the same weapon. And the same for the Atomosians (but of course different/opposite ideology).
-the argument between Aerrow and piper on the identity of the mysterious person with the staff weapon was so enjoyable and sensible.
-"Finn...had even managed to attract a small crowd to him, the boys with sullen look..and the girls with bashful ones." -"Now, what did you get me...I swear if there isn’t a new book..." Again i like these funny/ comic relief moments in between the lines of the main heated plot.
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-"the meeting was an absolute waste of time...wanted to wring Harrier’s beefy neck..." Lol the main is professional in his craft. Definitely need learn from him/his techniques 🤣.
“Unless you need to leave before then? I believe you had mentioned not wishing to stay here for more than two days, if at all possible.” Ah! The polite but surely effective, dismissal technique 😒. The man really is a master in that field.
“But one more day just to go over a few more theories or look up..." Lol i love the two girlies scheming against harrier. Let them get their revenge for making them waste those precious 3 hs 😁👌.
-“The investigation into the matter wasn’t assigned to you by the Council?” -"No?" -“Then why are you investigating it?” Arrrrrgh! (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ ﾐ ┻━┻ Oof! The man flipped the table so smooth!. Well what do they say?. you can't beat the master in his field 😒
-"I’ll let the staff know to leave the books there for the night.” -Harrier's apology for revealing Aerrow's ancestry without her consent. Well to be fair the main has some nice traits. And many good things that counts in his favour 🤔👍.
"...but I’m happy with where I am in life; I don’t think knowing their..." Aww that's so sweet to know she's in peace/came to terms with her past/situation 🥺.
-Ah the dream again!. But it gets more and more intriguing 😯.
-I'm simply amazed at Aerrow's plan to deal with the situation and the cyclonians. And definitely would be eager to know more! 👀. .......... I'm reaaallly in lovvve with this fic this far and so grateful i had the chance to read it!. I can't imagine how much work/time/... you've put into it!. Kudos crystal to you, since i can only kudos/bookmark once 😁💯
Thank you again for sharing your art with us! Would definitely be eager to see more. And if you decide not i would completely respect/understand your decision. Hope you're fine, safe, and all the best. Until next time then ✨🌜
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MCRL on Chapter 5 Mon 15 Apr 2024 05:02PM UTC
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