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  1. The scene of Sig's friends calling him back to himself is really great. I like the sheer intimacy of Amitie holding Sig's soul in her hands. I also really like Sig deciding to hold on to being Sig because he likes who he is and he likes his friends and his friends like him and he doesn't want to make them sad by just letting the Sig they love disappear like a dream upon waking. It a really cool culmination of all the butterfly dream stuff that's been going on with him.
    Also

    “Oh, they’ll get over it!” Satan dismissively waved to the side.

    This sort of attitude is why you're "On the rocks" with the Red Soul, Satan.

    Last Edited Wed 24 Apr 2024 01:38AM UTC

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