This was absolutely incredible. I have no idea how you so expertly wove together the story that stayed true to the feeling of Coraline but fit the characters so perfectly. Everything was so vivid! I was hooked the entire time. I absolutely adore the chemistry between real Al and Luci. They’re so sweet and you can tell how much they love each other. Charlie was so charming the whole time and she was so easy to get behind and root for. I loved how she was a brave heroine but you still kept her a KID. Because sometimes that gets lost. Not here. I loved all the threads you left throughout the set up and how wonderfully they all came together. This was incredible and definitely worth rereading. I would ADORE reading a prequel with Al and Luci. Al is so freaking lovable and charming in this story.
Thank you!! It was definitely a challenge weaving together some aspects of Coraline while still staying true to who Lucifer/Alastor/Charlie/Vaggie are, but I'm so glad I was able to manage it! Coraline's one of my favorite movies and I really wanted to capture just how vivid and BEAUTIFUL everything in the movie is! And I just loooooved writing the relationships between the two fathers. <3 <3 They have loved each other for years and are trying their best to raise their little Charlie while also dealing with all of this.
Yes!!! I wanted to make Charlie seem like a kid, but a very smart and brave kid. She doesn't understand that much of the world compared to the adults, but she also isn't stupid! Thank you so much for reading!!!
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